雅思寫作頭腦風暴：對犯罪事件的詳細描述
作文題目
IELTS 21
The detailed description about crime will affect the people and cause many social problems. Some people say that the media should be strictly controlled. Do you agree or disagree?
題目翻譯
對犯罪事件的詳細描述會影響人們，還會引發一些社會問題。有人認為媒體應該得到嚴格的控制。你同意這個觀點嗎?
題目分析
題目要求我們論述媒體是不是應該得到一定的控制，控制了是不是可以減輕對人們的負面影響和減少社會問題的發生率。
頭腦風暴
1. 你通過媒體有見過對一些犯罪事件的描述嗎?這些資訊有什么特點?
用戶回答參考：
●Yes. Most of them will give a description of how the criminals commit the crime, the tools they used, what did they do to the victims, and the purpose of why they would do this.
●有見過報道犯罪事件的，這些資訊大都比較詳盡地描述犯罪過程和細節，有時會偏血腥和性格扭曲。
●有看到過。對犯罪事件的描述及其生動，竟然還希望達到引人入勝。。。。達到故事、小說的效果。
2. 你看完這些資訊之后有什么感受?
用戶回答參考：
● I will think further about why the criminal would do this. Is it because of his human nature, or because of the social influence, e.g. the education hes got, what did he experience during his childhood, and the unfair treatment hes got in the society.
●對于青少年或思想還未成熟的年輕人可能會產生負面作用。
3. 你覺得這些資訊報道對人們有什么負面影響?會造成什么樣的社會問題?
用戶回答參考：
●I dont think it will cause a lot of negative effect in peoples daily life. People will of course talk about this crime, but these topics can make parents and education agencies aware of the problem lies in education and try to provide a better way to teach the children. Meanwhile, if the crime is caused by the social environment, government will probably face the social pressure to come up with new policies to avoid further tragedies.
●這些資訊讓人看了之后會認識到社會上很多不良的方面，進而人心惶恐，人與人之間缺乏基本的信任;更有些人還可能會模仿這些犯罪事件，實施又一次的犯罪。這些會給增加社會的不穩定性，如果警醒的目的沒達到，反而會給新的犯罪提供模仿依據。
●給有犯罪動機的人啟發，給害怕被害的人增加了很多不必要的心里負擔。更易引發犯罪事件，或者引起盲目的社會恐慌。
4. 造成這些問題的原因是歸結于媒體的報道嗎?控制媒體能起到怎樣的效果?
用戶回答參考：
●Media report may have some impact on these crimes, such as spreading this kind of news would cause similar crimes to happen in other areas, but in terms of the root cause, we can hardly blame the media. Media should be an effective way of reporting and analyzing the root cause to make the mass media to think about how to avoid such tragedies.
●媒體報道只是間接的作用，最主要的原因是全民教育程度不高，或者是貧富差距擴大。
控制媒體可以在絕大多數情況下阻止一些不良的信息通過媒體流入社會，但是大眾又有知情權啊，有點矛盾
●這問題部分是媒體報道造成的。如果媒體得到一定的控制，我想人們獲取犯罪信息的渠道也會相對健康很多，正面的效果應該比較好。
作文題目
IELTS 21
The detailed description about crime will affect the people and cause many social problems. Some people say that the media should be strictly controlled. Do you agree or disagree?
題目翻譯
對犯罪事件的詳細描述會影響人們，還會引發一些社會問題。有人認為媒體應該得到嚴格的控制。你同意這個觀點嗎?
題目分析
題目要求我們論述媒體是不是應該得到一定的控制，控制了是不是可以減輕對人們的負面影響和減少社會問題的發生率。
頭腦風暴
1. 你通過媒體有見過對一些犯罪事件的描述嗎?這些資訊有什么特點?
用戶回答參考：
●Yes. Most of them will give a description of how the criminals commit the crime, the tools they used, what did they do to the victims, and the purpose of why they would do this.
●有見過報道犯罪事件的，這些資訊大都比較詳盡地描述犯罪過程和細節，有時會偏血腥和性格扭曲。
●有看到過。對犯罪事件的描述及其生動，竟然還希望達到引人入勝。。。。達到故事、小說的效果。
2. 你看完這些資訊之后有什么感受?
用戶回答參考：
● I will think further about why the criminal would do this. Is it because of his human nature, or because of the social influence, e.g. the education hes got, what did he experience during his childhood, and the unfair treatment hes got in the society.
●對于青少年或思想還未成熟的年輕人可能會產生負面作用。
3. 你覺得這些資訊報道對人們有什么負面影響?會造成什么樣的社會問題?
用戶回答參考：
●I dont think it will cause a lot of negative effect in peoples daily life. People will of course talk about this crime, but these topics can make parents and education agencies aware of the problem lies in education and try to provide a better way to teach the children. Meanwhile, if the crime is caused by the social environment, government will probably face the social pressure to come up with new policies to avoid further tragedies.
●這些資訊讓人看了之后會認識到社會上很多不良的方面，進而人心惶恐，人與人之間缺乏基本的信任;更有些人還可能會模仿這些犯罪事件，實施又一次的犯罪。這些會給增加社會的不穩定性，如果警醒的目的沒達到，反而會給新的犯罪提供模仿依據。
●給有犯罪動機的人啟發，給害怕被害的人增加了很多不必要的心里負擔。更易引發犯罪事件，或者引起盲目的社會恐慌。
4. 造成這些問題的原因是歸結于媒體的報道嗎?控制媒體能起到怎樣的效果?
用戶回答參考：
●Media report may have some impact on these crimes, such as spreading this kind of news would cause similar crimes to happen in other areas, but in terms of the root cause, we can hardly blame the media. Media should be an effective way of reporting and analyzing the root cause to make the mass media to think about how to avoid such tragedies.
●媒體報道只是間接的作用，最主要的原因是全民教育程度不高，或者是貧富差距擴大。
控制媒體可以在絕大多數情況下阻止一些不良的信息通過媒體流入社會，但是大眾又有知情權啊，有點矛盾
●這問題部分是媒體報道造成的。如果媒體得到一定的控制，我想人們獲取犯罪信息的渠道也會相對健康很多，正面的效果應該比較好。
