河北省2024高考英語二輪復習專題訓練：

　　短文改錯+書面表達（11）

　　短文改錯

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(^)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改

　　2．只允許修改l0處，多者(從第處起)不計分。

　　There are lots of experience in our life．The most unforgettable one for me is the speech

　　competition holding last year．I’m interested in English．When my English teacher told me

　　that I had chosen to take part in the speech competition．I devoted me to the preparation．

　　I was determined to win the first prize．I was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot

　　everythin．Not until I caught a sight of my teacher did I calm down．Finally，I do a good job．

　　When I heard I got the first prize，my heart was filled in joy and tears rolled down．Through

　　this speech competition，I understand that it is confidence which makes people successfully．

　　書面表達

　　假定你是李華，春節前收到美國朋友Eric的來信。根據以下信息，給他寫封回信。

　　1．介紹傳統節日春節；

　　2．談談目前學習情況；

　　3．邀請他暑假來中國。

　　注意：

　　1．詞數100左右；

　　2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

　　3．開頭與結束語已為你寫好。改錯There’re lots of experience in our lives. The most unforgettable one for me is the speech

　　experiences

　　competition holding last year. I’m interested in English. When my English teacher told me

　　held

　　that I had ∧chosen to take part in the speech competition, I devoted me to the preparation.

　　been

　　myself

　　I was determined to win the first prize. I was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot

　　so

　　everything. Not until I caught a sight of my teacher did I calm down. Finally, I do a good job.

　　did

　　When I heard I got the first prize, my heart was filled in joy and tears rolled down. Through

　　with

　　this speech competition, I understand that it is confidence which makes people successfully.

　　that

　　successful

　　書面表達

　　How glad I am to hear from you!

　　Now, our winter holiday is just over and we have begun our new term. During the winter holiday, we celebrated the Spring Festival, when we always have a family get-together and eat dumplings. It’s really fantastic! I’m in senior 3 and this is my last term in high school. It’s one of the most important parts in my life. As you said, if we put our heart in doing something, everything you try will be possible. Though the school days are tough for me, I will still work hard.

　　I will be free this summer. How I wish you could come to China! I’m looking forward to your visit to my hometown. (112 words)

　　Give my best regards to your family.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　河北省2024高考英語二輪復習專題訓練：

　　短文改錯+書面表達（11）

　　短文改錯

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(^)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改

　　2．只允許修改l0處，多者(從第處起)不計分。

　　There are lots of experience in our life．The most unforgettable one for me is the speech

　　competition holding last year．I’m interested in English．When my English teacher told me

　　that I had chosen to take part in the speech competition．I devoted me to the preparation．

　　I was determined to win the first prize．I was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot

　　everythin．Not until I caught a sight of my teacher did I calm down．Finally，I do a good job．

　　When I heard I got the first prize，my heart was filled in joy and tears rolled down．Through

　　this speech competition，I understand that it is confidence which makes people successfully．

　　書面表達

　　假定你是李華，春節前收到美國朋友Eric的來信。根據以下信息，給他寫封回信。

　　1．介紹傳統節日春節；

　　2．談談目前學習情況；

　　3．邀請他暑假來中國。

　　注意：

　　1．詞數100左右；

　　2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

　　3．開頭與結束語已為你寫好。改錯There’re lots of experience in our lives. The most unforgettable one for me is the speech

　　experiences

　　competition holding last year. I’m interested in English. When my English teacher told me

　　held

　　that I had ∧chosen to take part in the speech competition, I devoted me to the preparation.

　　been

　　myself

　　I was determined to win the first prize. I was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot

　　so

　　everything. Not until I caught a sight of my teacher did I calm down. Finally, I do a good job.

　　did

　　When I heard I got the first prize, my heart was filled in joy and tears rolled down. Through

　　with

　　this speech competition, I understand that it is confidence which makes people successfully.

　　that

　　successful

　　書面表達

　　How glad I am to hear from you!

　　Now, our winter holiday is just over and we have begun our new term. During the winter holiday, we celebrated the Spring Festival, when we always have a family get-together and eat dumplings. It’s really fantastic! I’m in senior 3 and this is my last term in high school. It’s one of the most important parts in my life. As you said, if we put our heart in doing something, everything you try will be possible. Though the school days are tough for me, I will still work hard.

　　I will be free this summer. How I wish you could come to China! I’m looking forward to your visit to my hometown. (112 words)

　　Give my best regards to your family.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua